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this month's topic is "blooms of changes"

my poem:
“Blooms of Change”

The pitter-patter of rain on the roof
The first birds coming out to swoop
Blooms of change are coming
Surely this means something

When they’re no rain, there’s always sun
Children out and having fun
Bikes took out just for the spring
Now new birds begin to sing

Of course, this means the bloom of spring
The changes around the world can sting
But you can tell form anything
The bloom of change is here.

Dry old grass had wept and wept
Buried under snow was where they were kept
Churning down came new spring rain
Slapping on the window pane

The nature of spring makes all things change
Rain slapping on the window pane
When it’s not wet, there’s always sun
When children are always having fun.

Soon it begins to pour
Streams gaining water, more and more
Cracks through ice, the current pushes through
Fish cheer for the current’s cracking shoe.

Snow ends and then comes spring.
When flowers bloom and birds will sing.
Then the dark gray clouds will stop
And only the sun will be out a lot.

The bloom of change is finally here,
The world has changed over the year.
One thing for certain, one thing we know,
The spring is finally here.

Should I submit it?

OMG i luv it!!! I wish i could do poetry like that:roll:!!